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Post by MISSTRESSOFHALDIR on Jun 17, 2003 6:24:25 GMT -5
The year is 3025
One day in Middle~Earth the day was the 15th March a plane crashed in the Loudwater River not far from Rivendell on the bank of the River a female called Demora Knight was found by Haldir,Rumil,Orophin,Legolas,Haldir then picked her up and putted her onto his horse with him. Then they rode to Rivendell when they got to Rivendell they were greeted by Nydamwen I was then taken to a room and I was then putted into bed by Haldir I then fall asleep. I slept for two days when I woke up on the thrid day there was a Elf standing over the bed and he said I am called Legolas and welcome to my home then Legolas said what is your name? I then said that my name is Demora Knight I then asked Legolas where is the person that picked me up and putted me onto his horse with him? Legolas then said that his called Haldir and his an Elf like me. Then there were two more people standing over the bed and Legolas then said that this is my wife and she's called Nydamwen and this is my son and his called Ilverin (elvish name of Littleheart). Then Nydamwen said that you will see Haldir tomorrow Legolas then said that Haldir will be pleased to see that your awake Ilverin asked me where did I get that mark from? I then told them that I was born with this mark and that my mother was Human and my father was a Vampire I then saw that Nydamwen had a look in her eyes as she knew that she know what a Vampire was.
the end for now
melwe from
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Post by Morwen on Aug 11, 2003 21:47:59 GMT -5
this is a unique story........but im lost as to how a plane crashes into middle earth.... unless ur implying that our world exists at the same time as M.E......are u?
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Post by Galadh on Oct 21, 2003 14:30:21 GMT -5
It goes back to the Lost Road, man, The Lost Road.
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Post by CithCanan on Mar 22, 2004 13:21:25 GMT -5
not being over critical or anything but... I had the hardest time trying to read that. You're missing a whole lot of punctuation and you flip from third person to first person without rhyme or reason. Also, Legolas's home is in Mirkwood, not Rivendell. One more thing, why is Haldir in Rivendell? He's from Lothlorien.
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